Reviews for Behind Your Walls

angel1357 2006-05-16 ch 1,	abuseYou know, I feel the same way with my friends. When in a group, of even three, they put up walls, but when it's just two, no matter who it is, they reveal thier true selves. I've seen the inside of them, the only problem is when you don't know which is the show, what you see when your with just them, or the group? It's a question never to be answered... Well, thanks for the review too!Keep up the good work.
fiercelaststand 2005-04-19 ch 1,	abuseI forgot you wrote this. I really like it :)Especially the last four lines, that's my favorite part.
marguarita 2005-01-28 ch 1, anon.	abusethe poem was pretty, good, and strong, love the wording, Ian, keep writing :D
Hokeysmoke 2005-01-07 ch 1,	abuseVery interesting. Romance poetry from a man's perspective always intrigues me. If I had any complaints I'd say that your rythym seems to change after the 5th line, but it wasn't enough to make me stop reading, or feel uncomfortable.