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*applauds madly* YAY! That was a fanatastic installment, and story as a whole. LOVED it. I almost cried a couple times, although I don't know why. So Lana and Martin are dead... aww. But Glenn lived lol. And Remy seemed much more likeable at this point, and after that one scene with her mother I'm almost relieved that she lived. Excellent work. And the rest writes itself. Now I'm off to read your newest story. Keep up the magnificent work.

omg I'm terribly sorry it has taken me so damn long! I've just been awfully busy. Forgive me *grovels* But anyway, on to the review. Great work. I'm a bit sad that Alvin died, but he was starting to have less and less real appearances anyway, so it might just kind of slip by unnoticed. I kind of hope Glenn survive, surprisingly. And it's not because that's my boyfriend's name *shifty eyes* lol really, it's not. But Glenn never actually did anyhing to Kenny in life. So it seems kind of cheap ** for him if he dies. That doesn't excuse Glenn's cocky attitude, of course, but you get what I'm saying. Well, I'm off to read more more more!

Hey, I've been reading your stry, and its great so far, keep up the good work! I noticed a couple things wrong with it though:

"Hitomi gives Nate a long on his lips,"^ I'm pretty sure you meant to write "a long kiss", right? ^^

"It was tarring us up inside.” His mother says."^ actually, "tarring" is spelled "tearing"

"Late that evening, Natasha is staying over Martin’s house."^ it needs an "at" between "over" and "Martin's"

*cringe* Just thought you should know. ^-^

Great story, the paragraph detailing the fight in the church seemed a bit rushed to me. Ah well, though, it was all about the gore and character interactions that I looked forward too anyway.

Personally, one of my favorite parts in the chapters I just read was when Remy and her mother, Beth, finally realized how much they truly cared about one another. I'm a sucker for touching moments I guess.

It was a great read. Thanks for putting so much time and effort into this story. It shows.

aw~ martin died? T.T I liked him. at least he died heroically. ^ ^and im glad solomon and kenny is dead!!o(^_^)=O(>0

Martin died?! Aww. I thought he was going to live. You know, become the hero of the story, or something. Well, he did kill Solomon. That was cool. Lana and Glenn . . . hmm, I don't know. But, oh well. Really nice story! I was glued to my seat. Couldn't get off until I finished it.

My feelings for Martin has definitely changed. At first I thought he wouldn't be much of a main character by the way you described him earlier: simple, normal. But now, knowing his problems, I don't exactly pity him, but its sad. But the way he defended himself against Solomon was - how can i put this - heroic.

And they all - well, not all, but some of them - lived happily ever after! An excellent close to your story. I was disappointed that Lana and Martin popped their clogs in the end, but hey! At least Remy didn't. Anyway, great work!

I can actually see this happening...one gone by fire, one by water. I didn't think it'd be so simple, though...

Make a sequel - or start on another horror story. ^_^

Oh...wow. Shocking. I never thought Lana would die. Very good ending...definitely not a happily ever after, though

w00t :D i reviewed the first episode and i though i should again. i think this and tarot cards relate you have some mentionings in the story.I though alvin would stay till the end. and him and kenny wud have a showdown.Finally i have a suspicion that Erin may be a bad guy :D.but thats just me

ah! I love your story so much!! ^ ^well I think that the last standing will be Martin. lol. mostly because I dont want him to die. lol.and for charectors I miss... I miss Natasha, Shawn, and Hunter (even though he was an **) oddly, I also miss Dylan. i dont know why, but I liked him. I'm glad Hitomi, Anna, Kenny died.

Lol, they can't be killed. That's lovely.

This is a wonderful story. VERY creepy, but in a good way. ^_^ I felt very sorry for Kenny in the beginning but now I'm mad at him for turning into a murderer. It's very easy to connect with the characters. I suppose I miss Hitomi the most because she made me laugh and you saw that she really was a nice person in the end. I think the last one standing will be Lana because a) she's a good person and b) in some scenarios you see that she's got initiative. Anyway, great story!

~Animaze