It's too bad there isn't more of this, I'd like to read it. I like it, suffice it to say. I've always liked free-roam adventures in a new land stories, although I don't know much about RPGs.

I loved actually reading it. Yes I know I heard the whole thing at the open Mic nights and all but! Just some advice. Your paragraphs are a bit liquidy you might want to add more to them. Go into more detail.

That was so cool ^.^ Great job can't wait for more. I like how both Savannah and Zashi are a bit of a wise **. update soon. and I can see why everyone likes zashi! lol he rox

very good sam. can't wait to attack this out at open mic night.