Wow, excuse my french, but that was a complete mind-fuck. Intense, weird, but over all a very well written story. I am still confuse, and thinking to hard. I understand why Leon had a head ache. I wish I knew what happened next. But I kind of figured some one was going to die at the but I thought it was going to be Leon. Well thanks for the read.

what the hell? wjat happened there? v's and r's

uh? i love this story already. It's quite funny. Business and time and time and business. OMG doesn't Leon know he has the note

i read the reviews for this story and the word mindfuck came up quite a few times.

I'll leave it to you to decide if they were right.

It's kind of hard to make sense of anything immediately after reading this.

I think even the most creative of plot's will seem dull now.

I'm trying to paint a picture of what type of person you are and all I'm coming up with is a hazy gray puff of smoke. Or a robot.

and this is by far the most disjointed review i have ever written. If i exist of course.

What an engaging story you've written! Leon's incredibly complex and I adore his sarcastic character! I like the world of the anarchists, but it'd be nice if you developed it more because there's a lot of potential for this little (?) society (or perhaps you already do that and I have yet to find out about it in later chapters!). Keep up the good work! By the way, is there a link to your forum? I didn't see one on your homepage.

I've just got to stat this, your fucking with my mind and I'm loving it. I can't help being drawn to stories like this and your's is so expertly written.

this was really intresting, i loved it :)

I actually understood seventy percent of this story...and I believe that to be an accomplishment. It makes perfect sense because it makes no sense (and I do believe that's pretty much the premises, right?).

Thank you. As with everyone else, my brain has never hurt in such a pleasant way.

Well. That was one HELLUVA anagnorsis. It was almost hard to keep up with. But then again, just about everything in this sotry was hard to keep up with. Well, that's a lie -- I pretty much understood it, but that's surprising in and of itslf. Reading thi has given me the best mindfuckingly pleasant almost-high I think I could ever get from reading something online. It was actually somewhat stimulating, for crying out loud. NOT something commonplace around , especially of the slashy variety.

You'd be a good transgressive writer. I thrive on shit like this. Thank God for intelligence.

Wow...i Loved this story it was kinda confusing but i can understand it in a weird way damn it was good

Brilliant, one of the most original stories Ive read in a while

My brain hurts.

I don't think it matters just how confusing the story was i still loved it. i loved the people the personalities and i loved how kyle was the pansoph. the characterization was so intresting and the whole story was full of all these oddities and quirks that just kept me reading.

I knew the story was fictional from the beginning but the idea of a few people around the world being arealists seemed to make perfect sense to me, i even googled it =P

Wow. I dunno. My brain just...wow. I loved it, I adored the writing style, and your characterization...I fell in love with Leon five seconds in.

Now I'm gonna go read some more of your work...

I am so fucking confused but somehow I don't care all that much. Leon's thought process is hysterical and oddly like my own when I'm awake enough to process much of anything. I thought it was odd that the only colors described in this whole story are the gang colors and that I have no idea what any of the characters really look like but I have images of them anyway so kudos to you for that. I think.

I don't know where to begin with, I'm not good at expressing my thoughts and opinions in english but I'll try because I'm not sure if you understand French.
First of all, I think i understood the story however i need to reread it...I'm sure my conception of the story will change then and i would have a new totally different idea of what you meant by all that.
At first, I said: What the hell is all that? Is this one of those stories where the writer thinks he's writing something deep and meaningfull...but he is not.
Then, I started to think that maybe you know what you are doing, and the stupid one for not seeing it clearely...because after thinking about it: It actually makes sense in a bizarre way.
So right now, I don't know what to think: Are you a genius or a dellusional? Am i waisting my time thinking and trying to understand all the metaphisical stuff and trying to see all the story's strings?
But I have to tell you that, you must publish your story...It will of course need to rewrited and changed in some aspects but in the end it's worth it. Because the last time i was so confused by a story it was: La dame numéro 13 (the lady number 13'i think') by José Carlos Somoza (you should read it if you love poesy)
But what is sure, is that i loved your writing style, it was perfect.
Thank you for giving me the joy of reading this