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| a muse's inspiration 2005-08-28 ch 1,  | abuse"Hair like corrupted pearls" just paints the most eerily beautiful picture in my mind... Beautiful poetry, Will. I can see where the Hamlet connection would come from. *love* naomi x |
| BasilPoisoning 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abusevery good poem ^_^ |
| Jessicka-scab 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseVery intriguing, and again dark. I really do like your work. Keep it up (tho of course you will anyway) |
| Rose of Granuaile 2005-01-23 ch 1, | abusehmm, I seem to have missed this one...well, I really enjoyed it, this is exactly the picture that was in my head when I read Hamlet. Another brilliant piece! ~Hip |
| Disbelieved Prophetess 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I like that after a somber description of a dangerous foe, the ending isn't concrete. You leave it open to interpretation, in a way. |
| giggles for boys 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abusehey, great poem! Hamlet's a classic. Oh, thanks for reviewing my poem by the way. ^_^ To get pictures on your profile, you have to pay for membership. There is information on the bottom of your personal page when you first login. You get an email account, a picture, enhanced statistics, ads, and your poems will show up more frequently. It's lots of fun!! |
| Chad 2004-12-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou spelled stretched wrong. Otherwise it was good but the endin wasnt too solid . Like it didnt flow cause its too many words. |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2004-12-14 ch 1, | abuseHmm interesting...reminds me of an rp charcter a friend portrayed...so much like real life sometimes. Very nice. Good peice. |
| Meghan 2004-12-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good William!! Lol..SCARLET PIMPERNAL! |