Li naa!!BlkGothPrincess

I'm just learning Japanese, but this is a haiku about monkeys so I'll make myself translate it fully. ^.^

Cool. A haiku about monkeys! Love it.

oh so THATS what it means! My friend, for some reason is terrified of monkeys... I think she'll like your poem (she likes being scared). ^^

The monkeys eyes stare at me, sparkling.

it certainly does have on eerie tinge to it. 0.o

keep on writing japanese poems! (but please translate them ^^)

I'll try to make them more.. poetic next time, it's just that (believe it or not) it's the first time I ever wrote a poem that wasn't a haiku and didn't rhyme. Apparently, people like poems better if they rhyme.. so the next poem I write will. Thanks for your advice ^^.

~SC

the words sound really smooth.. but sorry.. i cant speak japanese >.< can u translate it for me?