Reviews for Untitled Song - FictionPress.com

kessemm 2005-09-17 ch 1,	abuseI love iti like the whole life's a one way streetit's greatum about a title, I'd say either "back stabber" but I guess that's not to... well it's missing sometinghow about: "who's the fool?"well I don't knowthanks ofr reviewing my poem!me
HyDrOmAtIc 2005-08-17 ch 1,	abuseLoved the song, you can really see the emotions put into. Title suggestion would be Nothing's As It Seems. Love your work!
AlwaysAmberella 2005-04-02 ch 1,	abusethis is amazing too, you are so awesome, i totally feel the emotion in this, and there is nothing like betrayel by the one you're supposed to trust.Awesome Job. Solo
Forbidden Smiles 2005-01-25 ch 1,	abuseA song title I would suggest is...-Fake Truth-Fool Me Twice, Shame On Me-Mistaken Fool
Soviet 2005-01-24 ch 1,	abuseI've read this before (You showed it to me) Very song-like.. I guess since it is a song... Melody.. I could muster a melody for you. If you want you can sing it with our band. It's pretty I like the main line.
Close Your Eyes and Dream 2004-12-19 ch 1,	abuseI LOVE THIS ONE! how about calling it While you Stabbed my Back...Hm...does it work?...