Wow... that was actually a bit draining lol amazing work!! i think by the third stanza on I was feeling pretty hopeless ^^;; wonderful word choice!! gah...i would kill for you grammar structure *sigh* wonderful job!

Wondefrul nice imagery, sounds a little like Wraith the Oblivion. Touching and twisted.

The Magician

I must say your art is more surreal but life like at the same time spinning intracate beatifull storys with your words. I love your work

Mat

this is so powerful. you're a great writer! really really really fantastic work~:D

very interesting. like it

-Jo