Beautifully written, very touching. I'll send you an invite to our Christian site. If I have before please delete it and by all means keep on writing. God Bless!

LRB

it does remind me a lot of "I Love You More." I think Jeremy Camp sings that... i'm probably wrong though. (I can never keep names straight- lol!) But the massage you send through this is still really awesome. I especially love your ending! Great job despite the similarities!Lauren

Nice dog, very nice. It sounds like that one song this guy wrote a few months ago (i'm afraid i can't remember his name tho) called, "I Love You More". Very nice, writting is good too!

Huey A. * my story "Wedding Vows", it's just a bit like this here poem- GB!

Incredibly powerful poetry here! Excellent job... This poem is in my heart. You honor God through this one!

Beautiful and inspiring! . Keep up the great work, and write on!