Interesting. It was a great piece. I like how you added a little rhyme, but I liked the words beneath too. You did a great job. Its not too wordy and it says exactly what you mean.

Another emotive and inner soul graber. I love this writing, im getting hooked:)

One of your best, I feel. I can relate to that feeling- but of course, you knew that. A splendid piece.

wow, that was a pretty dark poem~~gives me the chills~great job!

Keep writing!