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| simpleplan13 2008-03-22 ch 140,  | abuselol this is so true! |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-05 ch 139, | abuseinteresting last two lines.. I like it a lot |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-16 ch 138, | abuseI love the line about volume clarifying.. awesome piece |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-04 ch 137, | abuseI love you take inspiration from everything.. awesome job |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-22 ch 136, | abuseinteresting... the title is really funny.. great piece... about running again.. lol |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2007-12-02 ch 134, | abusePoem about your thought process, the questions...loved it. A challenge...reminded me of a prefector sword. but anyway, maybe the blade made a small hole (the sheath already has a hole in it). Nap 3 powerful man, but "small results". |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-22 ch 116, | abuseI like those last 2 lines not |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-06 ch 115, | abuseinteresting... i like it |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-03 ch 114, | abusecute metaphor |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 ch 117, | abuseInteresting thoughts on the word. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 ch 118, | abuseThis "speaker" is so considerate. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 ch 119, | abuseBeer is certainly excellent for your health - the more, the better! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 ch 120, | abuseMachines certainly have minds of their own... |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 ch 122, | abuseSuch a contrast between your artificial, superficial, vision of the future, and then your sincere and passionate traditional ways. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 ch 123, | abuseHa! I love garlic! and tis so true... |