 simpleplan13 2008-10-29 . chapter 146I really like your rhyming here. You use some really great word choices to do that. Nice job. |
 tuieri 2008-07-09 . chapter 145ahh dear. this makes me laugh every time I read it. |
 simpleplan13 2008-07-08 . chapter 145I really like the rhyming and the word choices. Nice job. |
 simpleplan13 2008-07-08 . chapter 144I really like the "hula-hips" line, that was a great description |
 simpleplan13 2008-03-22 . chapter 140lol this is so true! |
 simpleplan13 2008-02-05 . chapter 139interesting last two lines.. I like it a lot |
 simpleplan13 2008-01-16 . chapter 138I love the line about volume clarifying.. awesome piece |
 simpleplan13 2008-01-04 . chapter 137I love you take inspiration from everything.. awesome job |
 simpleplan13 2007-12-22 . chapter 136interesting... the title is really funny.. great piece... about running again.. lol |
 THROUGHTHESEEYES 2007-12-02 . chapter 134Poem about your thought process, the questions...loved it.
A challenge...reminded me of a prefector sword. but anyway, maybe the blade made a small hole (the sheath already has a hole in it).
Nap 3 powerful man, but "small results". |
 simpleplan13 2007-08-22 . chapter 116I like those last 2 lines not |
 simpleplan13 2007-08-06 . chapter 115interesting... i like it |
 simpleplan13 2007-08-03 . chapter 114cute metaphor |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 . chapter 117Interesting thoughts on the word. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 . chapter 118This "speaker" is so considerate. |