I really like your rhyming here. You use some really great word choices to do that. Nice job.

ahh dear. this makes me laugh every time I read it.

I really like the rhyming and the word choices. Nice job.

I really like the "hula-hips" line, that was a great description

lol this is so true!

interesting last two lines.. I like it a lot

I love the line about volume clarifying.. awesome piece

I love you take inspiration from everything.. awesome job

interesting... the title is really funny.. great piece... about running again.. lol

Poem about your thought process, the questions...loved it.
A challenge...reminded me of a prefector sword. but anyway, maybe the blade made a small hole (the sheath already has a hole in it).
Nap 3 powerful man, but "small results".

I like those last 2 lines not

interesting... i like it

cute metaphor

Interesting thoughts on the word.

This "speaker" is so considerate.