This is very nicely written. I've seen others who write on a similar concept, but the way you portrayed it was beautiful.

IdeasOn pain and suffering[...]

The way you contrast adds to the feeling of it. That's my input on this poem.

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Thanks for adding me to your favorites :) I really like this one because it is exactly how I feel most of the time. Great job! **adds to favorites**

i think that captured what one experiences when he wants to write. yes. i think it did.

Hey!

I know exactly how this feels. Thank you for explaining what goes on in my head. Great job. Good form. I loved this. Keep it up!

Luv ya,Tashi :)