|Reviews for The I Love You Poem|
| born blue 1/28/06 . chapter 1
this is absolutely incredible. absolutely beautiful, i loved every word.
| crimsonfirefly27 12/26/05 . chapter 1
this is beautiful, your poetry moves me.
drop by sometime and read one of mine, if you have time.
| Stroke 12/3/05 . chapter 1
Good lines. I think the centered text works for you, even if it's generally not effective. Your syntax is too bumpy at times. Too many. Short. Lines. Makes it. Too. Jerky. To be. Romantic. That's how I felt when I was reading this. See what I mean? Try to give it some more flow between lines. They're not like sentences; the poem should read down and not start anew every line. Try to use more enjambement. Romance is a very smooth, flowing thing. The key is to acheive this feeling in the poem. Good good. I liked it.
| Elizabeth Bilberry 11/27/05 . chapter 1
This poem is just beautiful and gives me hope for this world.
| sunday night sky 11/2/05 . chapter 1
really lovely... such a sweet story :)
| Paizley 10/27/05 . chapter 1
It reminds me, in a way, of the guy I'm dating now and how I feel for him. I really like this.
| Embellished Heart 9/19/05 . chapter 1
Wow. I agree with what another person said. I didnt want it to end! Really beautiful. I loved it.
| hanfiddle 8/3/05 . chapter 1
simplicity and saying it as it is: you have my respect
| CostumeForAGutterball 4/30/05 . chapter 1
wow. That is truly beautiful! I love how you used the night in it and desciriptions of the atmosphere-quite effective-as if I were there watching it all-unseen. Goregeous!
| loves philosophy 3/9/05 . chapter 1
YAY! that was so beautiful...so is nothing to criticize on, it was great, nicely written.
| Brooklynn Star 2/17/05 . chapter 1
I was so caught up in the story, that i didnt want the poem to end! Excellent write!
| Wicked Vampiress 2/8/05 . chapter 1
Thank you for reviewing my song. I went to read some of yours and was simply shocked. lol 245? How do you do it? This is the first piece I chose to read at random, and it shall certainly not be the last. I love the way you vary the structure. It adds to the poem yet does not distract. Excellent choice of wording and style. I love it. :-D
| Forbidden Smiles 1/25/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful and work!
| myno 1/22/05 . chapter 1
Wow. That's going onto my faves list for sure- it's one of the most beautiful poems i've read in a very long time. It flows perfectly, and is all natural and real and beautiful. Gorgeous poetry, never stop writing.
| Amarise 1/19/05 . chapter 1
too good. you make me jealous