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| catseyeview 2004-12-20 ch 1,   | That desire tugs at your heart here, nicely written again. |
| end.or.fin 2004-12-09 ch 1, | oh man thats scary. very good, haunting. i sometimes feel the person you are describing. the only thing i desire is the thing that will destroy me, so scary and true. shivers. |
| Zero-Sum 2004-12-09 ch 1, | "Is the very thing that will be its destruction."^ good, classic line. +cat :) |