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| simpleplan13 2007-08-22 ch 173,  | abusei like this.. its cute and interesting adn prolly true |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-22 ch 172, | abuseI like this.. those two questions and answers are great.. adn the rapunzel thing was quite funny |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-04 ch 171, | abuseI like title and the how you worded the ending.. nciely done |
| simpleplan13 2007-07-27 ch 170, | abuseI like this.. the first stanza especially.. well done |
| simpleplan13 2007-07-23 ch 169, | abuseI like this.. the ending is especially great.. definately makes you think |
| simpleplan13 2007-07-01 ch 168, | abuseinteresting title.. i like the idea of changing choices without abandoning alternatives.. great two lines |
| simpleplan13 2007-07-01 ch 167, | abuseI like this... the title is great and I like the second stanza especially |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 ch 174, | abuseA little sadness and a lot of longing. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 ch 175, | abuseI love how you use active verbs to describe running, playing music, writing poetry - makes the entire poem have a sense of energy. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-15 ch 176, | abuseI love the cultural flair in this, and the allusion to Arthur (particular fav :D) Well, I didn't make a dent in catching with all the poetry backed up in email, but I enjoyed being able to appreciate a little. Now to another state of consciousness that I sorely need... ;) |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-15 ch 177, | abuseI love how you start with the literal aspect of songbirds, and expand upon it. Splendid. |
| simpleplan13 2007-04-16 ch 166, | abuseI like the whole time thing... and the title.. its cool |
| simpleplan13 2007-04-06 ch 165, | abuseI like that ending with the word in parenthesis |
| simpleplan13 2007-03-31 ch 164, | abusebeautiful |
| simpleplan13 2007-03-25 ch 163, | abusepowerful and beautifully done |