 simpleplan13 2007-08-22 . chapter 173i like this.. its cute and interesting adn prolly true |
 simpleplan13 2007-08-22 . chapter 172I like this.. those two questions and answers are great.. adn the rapunzel thing was quite funny |
 simpleplan13 2007-08-04 . chapter 171I like title and the how you worded the ending.. nciely done |
 simpleplan13 2007-07-27 . chapter 170I like this.. the first stanza especially.. well done |
 simpleplan13 2007-07-23 . chapter 169I like this.. the ending is especially great.. definately makes you think |
 simpleplan13 2007-07-01 . chapter 168interesting title.. i like the idea of changing choices without abandoning alternatives.. great two lines |
 simpleplan13 2007-07-01 . chapter 167I like this... the title is great and I like the second stanza especially |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 . chapter 174A little sadness and a lot of longing. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-16 . chapter 175I love how you use active verbs to describe running, playing music, writing poetry - makes the entire poem have a sense of energy. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-15 . chapter 176I love the cultural flair in this, and the allusion to Arthur (particular fav :D) Well, I didn't make a dent in catching with all the poetry backed up in email, but I enjoyed being able to appreciate a little. Now to another state of consciousness that I sorely need... ;) |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2007-05-15 . chapter 177I love how you start with the literal aspect of songbirds, and expand upon it. Splendid. |
 simpleplan13 2007-04-16 . chapter 166I like the whole time thing... and the title.. its cool |
 simpleplan13 2007-04-06 . chapter 165I like that ending with the word in parenthesis |
 simpleplan13 2007-03-31 . chapter 164beautiful |
 simpleplan13 2007-03-25 . chapter 163powerful and beautifully done |