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simpleplan13
2007-08-22
ch 173,
abusei like this.. its cute and interesting adn prolly true
simpleplan13
2007-08-22
ch 172,
abuseI like this.. those two questions and answers are great.. adn the rapunzel thing was quite funny
simpleplan13
2007-08-04
ch 171,
abuseI like title and the how you worded the ending.. nciely done
simpleplan13
2007-07-27
ch 170,
abuseI like this.. the first stanza especially.. well done
simpleplan13
2007-07-23
ch 169,
abuseI like this.. the ending is especially great.. definately makes you think
simpleplan13
2007-07-01
ch 168,
abuseinteresting title.. i like the idea of changing choices without abandoning alternatives.. great two lines
simpleplan13
2007-07-01
ch 167,
abuseI like this... the title is great and I like the second stanza especially
Nobody-n-Particular
2007-05-16
ch 174,
abuseA little sadness and a lot of longing.
Nobody-n-Particular
2007-05-16
ch 175,
abuseI love how you use active verbs to describe running, playing music, writing poetry - makes the entire poem have a sense of energy.
Nobody-n-Particular
2007-05-15
ch 176,
abuseI love the cultural flair in this, and the allusion to Arthur (particular fav :D) Well, I didn't make a dent in catching with all the poetry backed up in email, but I enjoyed being able to appreciate a little. Now to another state of consciousness that I sorely need... ;)
Nobody-n-Particular
2007-05-15
ch 177,
abuseI love how you start with the literal aspect of songbirds, and expand upon it. Splendid.
simpleplan13
2007-04-16
ch 166,
abuseI like the whole time thing... and the title.. its cool
simpleplan13
2007-04-06
ch 165,
abuseI like that ending with the word in parenthesis
simpleplan13
2007-03-31
ch 164,
abusebeautiful
simpleplan13
2007-03-25
ch 163,
abusepowerful and beautifully done
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