I don't know what to say. I just really like it.

nice poem. i like this. well written, you expressed emotions well. and i like the use of repetition, it works well with the piece. good job. :)

that is really interesting... I wasn't totaly aware of what was going on but I still liked it was was was I don't know but I liked it!

Interesting piece. Very imagery. I liked it's flow, liked the word choice. Good piece.