love the ending. ;)

great story here. jennings is such a cool villain. i'm off to read your sequel. good job with this.

This is a really good story. The descriptions are really good. But it doesn't feel like it's finished. I know that you haven't done anything with it for three years but it would b great if you did a sequel.

nice story

Since I was too lazy to actually log in...

Yeah, I had intended on emailing you this picture my friend drew after reading this story. It's Mordecai. She's really good so if you want it just email me.

Wow, this is amazing. The discriptions, everything, it's great. You're an amazing writer ^_^ Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading more about Jennings and Leslie.

-Nia

To Pinapple Lifesavers: I think they should be together, no doubt about it.

Support for sitabird: YES WRITE A SEQUEL!

what? thats it? come on people. oh well it was great.

This rewrite is friggin' awesome! Your writing gets better and better. Might get told I'm insane, but is it so wrong for me to want Leslie and Mordecai to get together? They just seem like they should be.

Also, are you going to repost Obstruction, too? I loved that story as well.

WHAT!

Don't just end it with "Leslie told her story." Have more happen!

More problems, explain why Mordecai wanted revenge! I'm going to sound like a little kid but oh well...

I WANT MORE MORE MORE MORE, it was so good!

Wow, very impressive, you had me practically glued to my seat! Keep it up :)

no! i like the unedited version better!

awesome! You are going to write a sequel...right? Right? I really hope you do.~Sita

i think i've said how much i love and respect your work enough by now...nah, i think i could say it again. I LOVE IT! *sobs* i do hate it when it ends though T__T such a great story. Semi-short and very nicely handled. Not many people have control over their works *raises hand* ^^;; BUT you do. Very nice job!!

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