oh MAN that was extremely disturbing...really really good!

original idea you got there...but when are you going to write about flowers that don't bleed and happy things?

Good God! Marshell is pretty insane. This was really good, I liked it. I can only imagine what Iris is going through. Geez... That was pretty creepy.

~*Crazy Baiko*~

Aww, how sweet! Lol, that was a ko0 story, too bad not many of these are seen around nowadays.

A very cool idea, although it seems to rush halfway through. Its amazing how 8th graders can pinpoint formaldehyde:

'Smells like.. formaldehyde!''What's that awful smell ... smells strongly of formaldehyde'

Perhaps you should have described what formaldehyde actually is, it could be confusing if you don't. The story has an innocent atmosphere about it, with brilliant strokes of sinister placed here and there. Maybe a little editing, and this will be perfect.~ JD