i like this, its quick smthg! nice job!

like this.really good.love the last verse w/ the brackets n all.really effective.

Wow i really like your poem...if you would please review mine look in my profile for them there are just too many(lol) *silence...it's unerving you never know what the other person is plotting against you*(tehe i am in school and writing this BWahahaha i am a bad girl)