'Tis a good poem. Though it sounds like you are trying a bit to make it rhyme towards the end. Anyway nice job. Karma Chameleon

Okay very striking, wll written and with a nice flow. Such a sad dtory as well, really shocking and captivating-Keith Andrew

my fave bit of that poem was the line saying "life's lesson, but not learning" it really sims up your feelings, and a bit of mine to!