I love it! Ok you are going on the favorite author list!

this is the most awesome poem I've ever read!

Greta poem Meg. Althought there is one thing I think you should change. In the summary of this poem, you say "Give me one more f*cking day. And you rated it G. lay off the f word. LOL! Great tho! A Megan classic, lol!

well well well. Sure is very interesting, and sure is well thought out. Great poem, seriously. I love it. U kno, I think I've said it many times already, but u r just really good. Keep up da work, ur my hero now (lol)

I think it could have ended a little better, but I simply loved the piece, especially the first two stanzas and on to, "The blessed land of Eden or Hell/In whatever life that you walk so well/To feel the ground and forces when/You taste, you touch, and you breathe in." Also, especially, "Something had died/And I gave out."

Very nice job, Megs.

Peace, hearts and cheers.

Jess

This is very cool. I like the first half better, but the whole thing just flows. Good poem :)

Mazasuki