I'll be honest now. It's so depressing and nasty; it's like you thought you were in a bubble and no one was even trying to pop it. The peaks line really irks me. But anyway- the poem itself is nicely written, though I can never read it without wanting to spit the words out of my mouth.

lovely depth and emotions. very well written and great work!

your wrist? is there something i should know?

Well written.

Wow, quite powerful. Just the idea of facades and the pain and stuff. The last sentence sums it all up darkly, like you're being humorous. Chilling, but good.