Your story's very well written. There's a lot of powerful emotion conveyed in simple words. You have much talent in that area.

The only thing that I have to say is that when most people jump, they usually fall head first.

Neko-chan

P.S. Had to get a new account. I forgot my old password.

... \ scary-ish

but i like AS ALWAYS! )

"life has ups and downs, but it is what you make it." was that a mistake on the last line? was it supposed to be "what you make OF it"?don't remember... gotta refer back to the original poem...

OMG! This is awesome. I loved it. It's so sad... Keep writing

i gotta say, this is a great piece of writing, and you better not be considering suicide, if so, send me a message, and i'll tell you how to kill yourself like a man or woman, or w/e, you get the point.