wow!i loved this!especially the line 'coz you come with secrets...'loved cool rhyming btw.

It reminds me of what happened recently between one of my friends and a guy. You know your own feelings, but to make into something as relateable as this is excellent.

pretty good, the lines seemed sligtly too long though, maybe if you broke them up at the pause in the center. Very well written though, love you-Keith AndrewOh and don't worry about that, I'm fine