It's such a beatiful poem... It's easy to understand and I think it's a feeling most of us have had sometimes. What I like the most is the ending, it can be a nice hope (I don't mean you have to cut, only that it shows how much love someone can give). Thanks for your review.

hm... there seems to be some uploading error, but overall, it was reli good~

~Never the never~

whats with the capital o with the ~ over it where there should be '? anayways, aside from the oddness of that, amazing poem!

wow.. very powerful.. amaxing job

WOw. That was so emotional. And the rhyming was written perfectly into the rhythem with great use of repitition. Well done!

Sugar

Oh my gosh, that was so sad. It was beautiful and well written and amazing, but just so terribly sad... -sniff, sniff- Keep up the good work and thanks so much for the review!