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Trench Coats Suck 2008-09-05 ch 3,	abuseloved it
Trench Coats Suck 2008-09-05 ch 2,	abusegreat chapter i don't think I'll review until I finish the story now it's to hard to wait to read next chapter by writing a review anyway I love where this is goin
Trench Coats Suck 2008-09-05 ch 1,	abuseI love the proluge
artificial destiny 2008-05-02 ch 23,	abusewow great
PeterMoore 2008-04-15 ch 8,	abuseluv it!
Dark Fever 2008-01-19 ch 23,	abuseno mommy its over! hahaha, gotta love just for laughs...anyway i'm a little sad its over, really this was totally freaking awsome, just the type of story i love, next to the dashing highlanders of 1513!! anyway totally awsome!! so going into my fav list!!
anitsirK 2007-10-28 ch 23,	abuseIt had a nice plot! But you could still add an epilogue, like what they did after escaping. Just to put some stability to their "uncertain future". But it was nice, very entertaining story. I was uncertain at first, about reading it, but it turned out great! :D
funkyfreak42 2007-08-10 ch 23,	abuseCUTE! Oh man, SO GOOD!!
AJS 2007-04-20 ch 23,	abuseThe romance in this fic happened really fast. For some reason I thought it would be harder for them to get together, but I guess that it was refreshing this way. My only critism is that I think the transformations from Yolinn & Johan's personalities in the beginning were too quick and abrupt to their personalities now. It was like one chapter they were really cold & closed off / mousy and timid and then the next Yolinn was wooing all the guys and Johan was this super sweet guy. I think you should have maybe gone through those stages or explained what happened to Yolinn when she was becoming transformed by Katie (maybe like she was all dressed up and suddenly felt a surge of confidence rush throughout her that she never knew she had before.) and made a differentiation between Johan's reputation and his actual personality. But this was cute and I'm glad that it had a happy ending. I'm glad that Yolinn finally stood up to her stupid aunt, but what were her aunt's intentions in taking Yolinn away from her mom anyways? And what ever happened to her mom? They didn't keep in touch at all? M cute story :) Keep writing! -- Alysa
exit laughing. 2007-03-06 ch 23,	abuseOkay, so I sat at my computer in shock for several long minutes, just staring at the screen. I LOVED THIS STORY! I love how you developed all of your characters' characters (he, he). You have a very special gift as an author, and that is being able to engage readers in a story. It may not have been the best written (though it was VERY well done), but I wouldn't have noticed, I was that engrossed in the story. Oh, I can't wait to read more of your stuff!! ;) ~Kt P.S. - I'm going to add this to my Favorites list, okay? Cheers!
Moonxpi 2007-02-13 ch 23,	abuseThe story wasn't half bad. It could have used a little more detail though. The plot was fairly original and I liked how Yolinn didn't change and even said she didn't want to be Linn. That made it seem more realistic. Not bad.
kat for president 2006-08-24 ch 23,	abuseJust read this, although it was written a year ago. Good story. Now I'm putting in a request to see how Texas is treatin' them and then some. That would be the sunshine on my cloudy day! (Heh) IB
ArtsyTartsy86 2006-04-12 ch 23,	abuseThat was amazing. I literally couldn't stop clicking the next button. I loved the flirty banter in the beginning. It was just so amazing and I could so see the whole silent girl/bad boy scenario actually happen. I literally laughed out loud when Yolinn went up to Johan and swatted the cigarette from him. I mean seriously as much as she is a mouse I was all you go girl. I loved the growing relationship between the two and could really see how they helped each other out. Yolinn being accepted into Johan’s group of friends showed just how much he cared for her and how much his friends just wanted the guy to be happy. I loved this story as a whole and loved where you ended it. It was like their happily ever after leaving the reader able to see that though they might have problems in the future they have made it through so much together that they can face anything else in the same manner. On another note I think you are a fantastic writer able to catch your audiences attention and you most certainly have caught mine. I look forward to going through your profile to see what else you have written.
Alenor 2006-02-14 ch 23,	abuseoh this was a really good story. i love it, cya later.
Juniper Nights 2005-12-18 ch 15,	abusehis step father is an **...

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