 Warren 2007-09-26 . chapter 1 ...Depressing, but true. i never feel that when you are around, though. i guess i am missing out. dammit... |
 Krista 2005-03-18 . chapter 1 roxy, sorry its taken me so long to actually review your (writings?)the days when i'm not me, and you're the only one who can tell-this is how i feel. its so hard for me to put{how i feel} in words. its amazing how you managed to take a subject as this and describe it with such beautiful words...krista |
 thepersonwhoyouhavebeentellingtoreadyourstuff(hint:r,notrebecca) 2005-01-07 . chapter 1 same goes as for the other suicidal story I reviewed. No depressedness. Depressedness evil *Sticks out lower lip, folds arms, and glares* If you feel like that, I will try to come to school in an Egyptian slave costume, follow you around to your classes, and bow repeatedly whenever you turn your gaze upon this unworthy almost-person. We normal beings should all be struck with awe when your holiness actually passes near these undeserving spawns of pond scum. If her gloriousness is upset, all must lie prostrate on the floor, begging for forgiveness for what is surely their fault. Merry days, great mistress. Do not mar your stunning features with distress. Fare thee well, most superior being. |
 honesta 2004-12-17 . chapter 1 Hey Baby,this is good! ...*shifty eyes* and...(for lack of a better word) depressing! Why? :( tell me! but it really is wonderfully written! :)
I love you, your honesta |
 Cierra Chapman 2004-12-16 . chapter 1 This one is awesome. As you read, it keeps you wanting more. That's how a lot of your writings are. I, and I;m sure a lot of other people could relate to this story. Its great! You get a **10**. hehe. |
 mom 2004-12-14 . chapter 1 very well said, I would'nt change a thing, kept me wanting to read more. LOVED IT! mom |
 Rimbaud's Whore 2004-12-11 . chapter 1very powrful - i like the way you use the fromat of a prose-poem to create such powerful iamgery and ideas. |
 Nocturna Wesa 2004-12-11 . chapter 1Whoa! Felt that one. (I just created my own acount on Fic. Press so I coan review ur stuff all the time now. Ur on my Author alert list and Fav. author list now.) |