*shudders*...so good

oh..wow...idk if i already reviewe3d but i'll say it again..that was great..if im not mistaken(whic, hel;l..mostnof the time..i am)its a poem about feeling like you need someone to forgie you for your sins.."And bled the innocence which i so protected" It's kind of like when youe yearn fro an innocence to be a kid again..no trouble or worries..

Oh god, this was so awesome! It gets a GREAT message across, while staying subtle the whole time! Fave stories for sure!

-Marth

pretty depressing, great job on this poem, it was well put together!