Short, but captivating. I hope the next chapter will be longer, but it sounds like the start to a really interesting story. Write more soon!

Very short, more like a poem so far than really a story, but I assume it will shape into a narrative form. I'm intrigued now so I will be coming back for more.

ooh, ooh, i know! pick me! *waves hand* it's the sea god! i'm so smart! *beam*seriously, this is a nice start. more more more! and btw, two words: handfasted. parents. You draw the conclusions. ^_^