Provacative, sensual, and extraodinarily sweet. I loved it. I have to admit though, the phrase "junior high dance" made the story less meaningful to me at first; but the rest of your story was so beautiful and genuine that I don't think I mind so much anymore. Brava!

Your description is so sensual and romantic.. and damn hot at the same time! This is what I want my love scenes to be like. Really well written.

i dont feel like logging lol but um thats naughty hehehehehehe

*Sigh* I wish I could write like that!

That's cute. I like it.

Well written.

very good :)

I like it! I think it would be cool if you continued it! If you somehow get a story out of it! ~adders~