Powerful and disturbing, brave to write about suicide, I really hope the story does not reflect your own feelings.If they do, don,t give up - you are a wonderful person.

That's some powerful, man. Well written, perfect tone for the subject - cold, detached, not melodramatic in any way as would be too easy when dealing with this type of story. And yet, it remained highly evocative. Very deftly done.

This is a beautiful piece of work. Strong choice of words and wonderful phrasing makes this very enjoyable. Well done.