I love this poem. Your choice of words made it easy to picture the wolf.

I really love this poem. When I read this, I was seeing the wolf slipping through his forest. I also really loved the paragraph that included the forest scents. The only problem I had was that wolves tend to be very social animals as a rule. Other than that, pure magic.

three words-I love it!

xoEmotional-Nightmare

I really enjoyed this one, Keith. In honor of it, I will be placing it on my favorites list. You should be honored;).

You describe the wolf and the scenery so well. Love the imagery. Love the poem.

This is beautiful poetry-and not something you'd often on fictionpress or anywhere! (I read too much poetry-I mean I have bookshelves of poetry). So how long did you take to write this poem? And perfectly? I was smiling the entire time while reading this, and I am ready to read more.

This is awesome it describes the lone wolf amazingly i thought.

I think that describes the lone wolf perfectly.

This is brilliant, truly. I found I was on your favorite authors list, thus I decided to read your work, I'm glad I did, this is beautiful. ANNA

o that was SOO good. Loved it, absolutely LOVED it. The imagery, the flow, the way it was written all complimented each other. Coherent sentences are now difficult to form, no joke. just...wow...^_^ AMAZING WORK!! -Rae

Wonderfully creative. Really. Great, no, wonderful job on this. I realy enjoyed reading it.

It's not all that bad, but it does have a number of things that could be improved about it. For one thing, there is an insane amount of repedity within the poem... and frankly it isn't needed. I'd suggest that you go through the poem and find those words that aren't needed. Also, the line breakes are made at odd times and it makes the pome quite eratic. Go back in and fix the breaks in the lines. Remember that in poetry there is no maximum size that a line can be. Take advantage of this fact.-Veral42

Keith...this is beautiful, i had a complete imagery happening while reading this.

It has an awesome rythym, it keeps everything tense.

Love it. The changing pace, the vibrant descriptions of the forest - I feel like I can hear the sticks snapping, and paws padding and thudding. Love the lines: "Kindling crackling beneath" "Yet, so strong, so suggestive,Mingle together with Resinous pine and sonorous oak." and "Fireflies dance erratically toThe confusion of crickets andLonesome arias of deepthroated owls."Great stuff. Faves.