wow. that was beautiful. me likes it!

Wonderful meaning and superb imagry. Keep up the excelent work!

Wow wow wow. Kiley this is beautiful, amazing, wonderful! This is my favorite poem that I have read of yours in a while(and that is hard to do condsidering all your poems are awesome). I love the line "Blood in my mouth, copper metallic

slice through my tongue and so

too my words which would have been

in sleek cursive inky letters if they had

found their way to paper." All the descriptions are incredible, but I loved the stars, the rusty nail, the grave, and the cardboard soul parts. Anyway, I will stop babbling on, but I LOVE LOVE LOVED this poem!

VERY original imagery, powerful message too. i loved your last few lines especially.

Some unique metaphors featured here. A strange request to the stars. Delicate and sad ending. This touched my 'cardboard soul'.

beautiful, abosutely gorgeous. I know that sounds like a stange opinon, but death and angst is an art, and you totally get that...awesome.