wow! that so beautiful. keep writing.


sad and solum.~erAced~

interesting poem...i love the last two lines!

A great and unique poem!

Wow! Beautiful work here. I love the pictures it paints in my mind. I would love to draw out what your words make me envision, but I'm sadly not that great of an artist. I could never do your words here justice. I love symbolism and this is a beautiful example. I also have a hard time coming up with free verse, and most poems I read are free verse. It's so nice to be able to read beautiful rhyming work like this.

Beautiful.

i love gaiman's death... xx

nice poem, i liked your iamgery and the way you summed up these emotions using descriptions of wings.