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| Purpose 2008-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseThat was good, sad, but good. I liked it and I showed it to another of my friends and she really liked it too. |
| Lauren Wolfe 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseShort, simple, sweet. Love it! ^_^ ((BTW, thanks for the review ;D)) |
| Ramenluver 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseI got the feeling that it flowed very naturally; no forced rhyming whatsoever. You tapped into the imagery very well. -Ramen |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseNice flow, i like the flower scheme. Interesting portrayal. |
| cannotthinkofaname 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abusei love it! it has a certain flow and rythmn to it, and it really has nice imagery. really, really well written. I kind of interpreted it as some kind of expression of despair, or a loss of hope |
| vanilla-cow 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI really, really like it! It just has a... flow. That's it a flow. It just has this nice rhythm that lets you picture each flower and the forest in your head. Love it! |
| RoseGirl1212 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseit's really pretty like i got a picture in my head. =) |
| Kamea-Pillan 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseWell, I liked it. I like rhyming poems. It's awesome. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2005-09-29 ch 1, | abuseNice work. I try to avoid rhyming when I can, but that's your choice, and it works well. :) |
| Ethereal Kisses 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuseHeya thanks for reviewing my poem! ;) I really like this poem - you're made the rhyming and rhythm of this poem so natural and flowing: I'm so jealous that you just wrote and it came out like that! I also like the tone of the piece - it sounds so emotionless and yet somehow sad as well. I'm not sure, that's just how it sounds to me. Anyway, it's awesome. Keep it up! ~ Ethereal Kisses ~ |
| Nanners 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abuseGAH! OK, I'm going to try to write a good review, but I was really distracted by this really super annoying talking advertisment. IT MUST DIE!! OK, anyway, poem: I don't think it's stupid and unoriginal. I like it, although it was very depressing. It seems to belong more in nature, but that's just me. Good work! |
| RavingJackal 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abuseNicely written! I see you're also on Fan Fic.Net. I was too until I got booted from the 13 Ghosts category. I had GREAT stories. If interested, give me an e-mail back...I have my own site now. |
| poetic abortion 2004-12-30 ch 1, | abuseNo this is not dumb and totally original. Well done !! ::Hands you a cookie.:: ~ Noelle ~ |
| Arsenic336 2004-12-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, it doesn't sound bad at all! Wow I love this it's awesome. |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2004-12-12 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It reminds me of something...one of those o ah poems that affect other people. Nice. |