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| Murphy's Lawyer 2006-07-31 ch 1,  | abuselooks okay to me. *grin* see you. |
| Acts.of.Whimsy 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abusehilo. i was lookin' 4 somthin 2 read n came across this. i like it! if u rote like a sequel r a chap. 2 i'd definitely read it. i also wanted 2 thank u 4 commenting on my poetry n ask once again if u'd review my latest poem. it's an attempted suicide called "Little Silver Bullet". would u mind? i hope not. but i do like this 1! k, catch ya l8ter! ~urXpoeticXfrend |
| djnelly 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abusehey i think u should write more this is really good kinda harsh and in your face which is a welcome chnage. but if its going to ruin the good story and swing of it then don't cause its very good as it is. all in all i like it. |
| Hidden Depths 2005-06-25 ch 1, | abusei really liked this story. I loved that the characters didnt follow a certain steriotype like how the popular guy turned out to be gay but the gay guy was not funny and lovable, he was still him. I also think that you did a really good job of just describing how her life was. The transition from talking about what was happening now and what happened during the play was a little confusing but besides that everything was really good. Keep up the good work |
| Ysabrylla Noakes 2005-06-11 ch 1, | abuseHmm.. I just wanted to let you know that I read this and really enjoyed it. You did a very nice job. :) |
| Vivian Hyde 2005-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was very good. I could relate to some of the stuff that happened. I really like the style of writing that this peice had.. it made it more personal... I also liked the part where she told him what she thought of him and the theme of 'what doesn't kill you makes you stronger.' |
| OneLitFirefly 2005-01-01 ch 1, | abuseloved it! write more!! please!! |
| fazzingaway 2004-12-14 ch 1, | abusehey, i was just poking arounf fp.com looking for something to read when i stumbled on your work and thought i'd drop a review :) i really liked this piece. it was a little random at certain parts but on the whole, it was really nicely done. i liked the narrative voice in this and i loved how there was a lot of things that most people could relate too :) great piece of writing! |
| Klanfer 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI loved this.It's really different to a lot of the stuff i usually read!Great work with it.But just one thing i found.You said up above that she used to write Mrs. Emily Harrison on her binders.But then you refer to him as Jake Lytle.Just check that over.that was the only thing i could find wrong!AWESOME FIC.xoxoxta'z luvli |