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| Blood.Butterfly 2005-09-15 ch 17,   | even with mistakes, i still liked it. it was good. nice job. |
| Esquirella 2005-01-23 ch 4, | I guess I'm a little behind. Great piece! |
| Cinera 2005-01-20 ch 1, | Wow, i don't feel bad for his parents at all, the insenitive bastards. You don't treat your kids like that. I know the feeling. |
| Perphekt 2004-12-26 ch 16, | You think too little of yourself. This story is really good! And I'm like the only one who keeps on reading it... Keep on writing! The only thing I have to say is that at first, the relationship happened too fast. They had hardly known each other when Michael asked Lang out and then they're all makin' out. But it's still really good ^^ |
| vampiregoddessblood 2004-12-26 ch 16, | kinda of very confusing...longer chpaters! |
| vampiregoddessblood 2004-12-24 ch 14, | i thought he told him already that he had aids... |
| KillingProphet 2004-12-24 ch 8, | Good very good |
| Perphekt 2004-12-24 ch 13, | OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! Gay guys is so hawt. XD Wow that is DEFINITELY rated R! Keep on writing! I love the story. And... There are only a few people reviewing... This is a really good story and it's a shame not a lot of people are reading it. Happy Holidays! |
| anonymous 2004-12-24 ch 13, | longer chapters...! |
| Perphekt 2004-12-23 ch 12, | Wow... now either Lang's just tired or he's got something wrong with him... Keep on updating! Please. ^^ |
| Demolition Lovers 2004-12-23 ch 1, | I don't usually read these type of stories, only because it's not really my type of thing, but this really caught my eye. Also, you really put a lot of feeling into this chapter. Good job. I'll be reading more. |
| Perphekt 2004-12-21 ch 10, | Wow! Ehe ^^; Why did you have to end on a cliffhanger?! That's like... cruelty to your readers! This is a really good story so UPDATE SOON OR ELSE! ^^ |
| vampiregoddessblood 2004-12-21 ch 10, | write more longer chapters... |
| Esquirella 2004-12-21 ch 1, | Very interesting beginning. |
| Perphekt 2004-12-14 ch 8, | It's good but... it's moving very quickly. I hope I haven't missed anything... Yaoi (Japanese word for guy-guy relationships)... my friends would soo love this story. Yeah keep on updating! And if you find the time, please read my story ^^ |