wow, so beautiful.

oo... very descriptive, and I love the emphasis on the words spelt on different lines...

Wow. This is amazing.Love every single bit of the imagery.You express yourself in a wonderful way. Keep it up!

First sentence so strong. Formatting so delirious. Great sense of space (we feel the dimensional aspect as we read and it's powerfully written). Neat vocabular play. I loved this poem.

LiquidHeat: Dandelions eh? Every time I read or hear that word, a field of marijuana always comes into picture. I have no idea why! But it’s funny! Never fails to make me laugh. Heh, looked at your homepage….and I’m jealous cause I haven’t finished mine yet. (Sniffles)

Wicked Tongue: Well, dahling, did you miss moi? I do hope so! I’ve always—

LiquidHeat: (To WT, “For cryin’ out loud, woman! Have you no decency? No morals? No soul? For God’s sake, put some clothes on!”)Do excuse her, she’s just excited that we’re all back.

The most notorious stalker of FP,The most perverted untouched virgin,-Wicked Tongue (aka-LiquidHeat)

this was really good.

Oh... I got your name from FP community. I like this though, very good!

i love the REAL poem. hes right...the real poem is SO much better so check it out at spidermatt . esmartweb . com /. it is one of the best poems ive read...its beautiful.