FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Sharpie Red 2005-01-13 ch 1,  | abuseNaww I like it! I think that it is really good!! Keep it up! |
| B.D. Gerretson 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abuseAww saddness. Its good but its very sad. I wish I could figure out a way to cheer you up in your poems. |
| Confuzion in a Nutshell 2004-12-20 ch 1, | abusedude,sounds like we need to work on your people-skills,lol.its well written, but the curse caught me a bit off-guard,what was up with that? well structured poem all in all |
| harshwarsh 2004-12-16 ch 1, | abusei thought the poem was eally good, although yes not one of your best "pieces", but it was really sincere and meaningful. i can definately relate to shis, and i definately know how much it hurts. but for me it was my fault most of the time.seya Johnnyp.s. it made my favorites, actually a few of your writings have made my favorites list, i really enjoy your writing. |
| CowGirl1987x2006 2004-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseit's almost like you just stoped right at the end, i felt the anger, tis was a good poem, :( i'm sorrys *HUGS* hopes ya feels bettersCowGirl |
| happy thing 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseAww, I'm sorry you got sadlied, but I hope writing this helped. It usually feel better after I write angry poems. You did it well too. Much love. |
| xoxkissxofxdeathxox 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseLove it... I could really feel the emotion... never stop writing... |
| AllieCat101 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseWow powerful poem, again with the anger but you use it so well. It's well written as well. :) |
| Stary Dynamo 2004-12-12 ch 1, | abusevery powerful emotions.. -hugs- |