Ooh I like how at the beginning you like sorted them into stereotypes and stuff, where she has a good personality and less care about looks, and he is all about good looks with a bad personality. But then they start thinking the opposite anout each other and he's like hey she's really pretty and she's like hey he actually seems nice and caring. I don't know if it was intentional but I just thought it was pretty cool :)

I loved it *squeals* wow sooo good

OMG! I actually read this story a long time ago and it was AMAZING! Everything in the story just kept me reading more and more i couldnt stop until i finished each chapter. I absolutly love it, thank youu for posting and sharing your work. Hope to read more like it.

nice story...

Hey, a totally loveable FF. I really enjoyed reading, thank you for writing it. :)

This was so cute(: I genuinely loved every detail of it.

Awwe such a cute ending. I liked this story. Glad you were able to finish it for us.

Still liking this story. It's a little Two Weeks Notice mixed with quite a few other things. I have to admit I've never really read anything quite like this.

I'm liking the story so far. Very interesting plot. I'm glad Devlin's father didn't die. You've managed to squeeze a lot into just a few chapters on here. At least it seems that way.

This was such a good story! I loved it!

Hi. Its beautiful chapter and I love it. :) Ah Devlin will meet Naomi for their monthly trip. How interesting. :) Ah Eva left a message for Devlin. How interesting. :) Ah Devlin and Thom went to the restaurant for lunch. How interesting. :) Ah Drew is a waitress. And I am glad that she stand up for herself. :) OMG Drew got fired because she insult Devlin? Why? Poor Drew. :( OMG Devlin find that amusing. How dare he thinks its funny. :( OMG Is James the father of Devlin? :S OMG James end up unconscious now. Poor James. Hopeful he's okay. *hopeful* I am off to read the next chapter now. I am enjoy read this story. And I love it. :D

Hi. Its beautiful chapter and I love it. :) Ah Devlin is the playerboy and get everything he wants especially with women. How interesting. :) Ah I am wonder how long the affair with Devlin and Eva are? *curiously* I am sorry for Cara that her parents never care about her. Poor Cara. :( I am so glad that Drew take responsibility for her family and raise Cara as if its her own daughter. :) What happen to Becca and Drew's parents? :S I am off to read the next chapter. I am enjoy read this story. I love it. :D

This was a heart-touching story. I loved each and every bit of it. There were some grammar and spelling errors but it didn't distract me while I was reading. Also, there was some illogical parts of the story but no worries, overall, I loved the concept and you have written it beautifully.

i must say this is a mindblowing story... hats off to u!enjoyed every bit to it!

aw! such a good story! :D