|Reviews for The Bride Hunt|
| xiaobudian 1/17/05 . chapter 9
ya know that fictionpress has a realli raky memory. I tried 2 review 4 chap 6 and 7 and 8, but it said i had already reviewed those chaps and yeah, i did but that was last year so... they're freaky!
| xiaobudian 1/17/05 . chapter 5
yeah, u've changed ur name! no wonder cos' i was trying to look 4 cliqenie but it didn't exist. Oh well, i thought i had a bad memory and stuff, but alls good now
| xiaobudian 1/17/05 . chapter 3
oh well, at least u finished it even when u didn't get many reviews cos' most ppl r like no oone's reviweing so i'm not gonan finish it. But u did so thankyou!
| xiaobudian 1/17/05 . chapter 2
yeah, i haven't been reviewing but i can't believe u've onli got a few reviews even tho ur story is awesome!
| xiaobudian 1/17/05 . chapter 1
r u still on fictionpress and r u gonna write anymore stories?
| alternatearcadia 1/12/05 . chapter 15
Fabulous. Really fabulous. I loved every minute, second, millisecond of it. Love the 2 characters. You've managed to flesh them out pretty well. The plot was terrific. Truly entertaining. I was laughing a whole lot! And, Devlin and Drew.. sigh.. such a sweet couple. Touched the romantic in me. Hopefully more such fics will be on its way soon! :)
| ONEthousandWORDs 1/5/05 . chapter 15
M. Very pretty. I especially like Drew's chara: tis well thought out and written. Minor flaws in the writing (wrong versions of words, a time or two that you had Bryn's last name be the worng version... just little tiny things), but overall very, very nice. _ I especially liked Drew going to the park and figuring things out. I was proud of her for not being stupid. And proud of her again when she was willing to make herself miserable so that (she thought?) Devlin could be happy with a woman better suited to his job. If I were you, I'd think about seriously going through this (again, if you already have...) and editing it a bit. It's definitely worth it. _
| ReinaLucille 1/3/05 . chapter 15
perfect. and still, no homework done. absolutely perfect, congrats on a great story
| hiphiphurray 1/3/05 . chapter 15
I couldn't stop reading your story to see what would happen next and because of this I totally forgot about lunch...-.-...I ended up eating at 3pm...anyway I thought the story was really good and I hate to admit this but I actually started crying when Drew was hurt by Delvin with the whole list and answering machine thing. Damn I'm such a sappy..."
| ReinaLucille 1/3/05 . chapter 10
oh lord, as if i can stop reading now.
| ReinaLucille 1/3/05 . chapter 9
omigosh, im gonna be in such trouble! i havent gotten ANYTHING done! every time i finish a chapter i think.. just one more, one more.. ok, one more.. school's gonna be one big bunch of suck tomorrow.. no work done at all! too bad you're so good at writing! on to the next chapter!
| ReinaLucille 1/3/05 . chapter 6
so, i'm addicted to your story, and its killing me because i dont have enough time to finish it.. my homework just isnt getting done! all blame goes to you, this story is awesome!
| Nala Ether 1/2/05 . chapter 15
i really enjoyed this fic. maybe a sequel in in order. i was thinking (yes, as surprising as it sounds even i occasionally think) wouldn't mind seeing something about becca finding out about drew and dev and coming back to either retreive cara or blackmail money from them.i really enjoyed cara, but i'm not to sure about some aspects of here character, don't 2 year old kids talk more. i'm not entirely sure on that but i think that toddlers of that age have a lot more movement (i know they really like the word 'No') so i don't believ that the scenes of cara setting calmly on peoples laps or in the car (i did like the scene in the helicopter with cara holding her hands to her head, that strikesme as a very sharp image, and a very cute one at that).
come on and write a sequel, how would dev's parents and 'society' (A.K.A evangaline and naomi) would react to cara's parentage and the fact that here is this rich dude marrying someone with a preschool child?questions questions. i really liked the fic and would like to wish you the best in your further writings (i read this 4 times and counting cos i liked it so much). sweet
| wanderingnachos 12/31/04 . chapter 1
Seems pretty interesting... but right now its 2:30 in the morning and everything seems too blurry right now... I need some sleep before I read the rest of it... BUT I'LL BE BACK! lol
| giddy 12/19/04 . chapter 15
Oh my god... This is absolutely one of the most romantic story I have ever read... It actually made me cry and laugh at the same time...I am so glad they got together...I love how you ended the story with a perfectly synchronized feeling that doesn't give too much away but enough to tell us readers that they are together and will live happily ever after(sounds kinda cheesy)...You made it sound so beautiful without making it corny...That indicates to someone that you are a wonderful author...You have a gift my friend and you better share it with everyone else...I will be wanting to read one of your novels sooner or later! Ciao