|Reviews for The Bride Hunt|
| sherbetsi 12/8/08 . chapter 15
wow that was so sweet and well thought out! i really enjoyed that!
| ReadWriteLive 10/28/08 . chapter 3
A cute start to the story...a few comments though.
First, a LOT of dialogue...try to put in more background and less talking.
Second, if she's making $50 a day working from 9-5 (which is very unusal timewise for a waitress, btw)...and we assume she's working 5 days a week...that works out to $130 a year... now since she's the head of household and has two dependents, including a tax deductable child, she's only taxed on about $5,500 of that money. That's a tax rate of about 5%, leaving her with about $12,725 a year...maybe slightly less.
If she's being paid now $10 a month by Devlin, that's LESS than she was making as a waitress and thus would not be a good deal. I would suggest upping it to either "$10 a week" or "$30 a month with a bonus of $10,0 if the woman is found before 6 months is up" or something similar.
good luck, I'm off to read more!
| I Murder on Impulse 10/20/08 . chapter 15
WHE! Hehe, I love it _
| OctoberAvenue 10/13/08 . chapter 15
This was such a sweet story. I really enjoyed reading it. Great job on everything! I loved it!
| reader 7/11/08 . chapter 15
But Naomi doesn't look down on Bryn? Was really convenient. Ah well, I guess realistic endings aren't exactly what I'm looking for in a romance story. :D
| reader 7/11/08 . chapter 13
THIS IS SO DEPRESSING. I really suddenly wish Evangelina to get run over by a taxi.
| reader 7/11/08 . chapter 8
I like how you wrap up your chapters! Loving this story!
| reader 7/11/08 . chapter 4
Wow, you're REALLY good at snagging a reader's interest! :D I love this story!
| reader 7/11/08 . chapter 3
Wow; really cool way of getting them together! haha
| reader 7/11/08 . chapter 1
Whoa, she has it SO bad. :(
I like your character introductions.
I wonder how it's going to work out between them.
| mustangchic 6/11/08 . chapter 15
I came across this story and I absolutley love it. Its like this book Match me if you can I read recently. You write really well. good job !
| L'aurore 5/11/08 . chapter 15
lets say that i awake till 4am to finish it.
i hv saved its 14 and 15 chapters... so its mean that u its really good
| she gets skills from the pills 5/7/08 . chapter 15
aw man you reduced me to tears and im serious
what a sweet story
-wipes away a tear-
although i suppose i AM emotional at like 3am but i just couldnt stop reading your story, wink.
| theslykit 4/5/08 . chapter 1
i love this story! :D
| xLittleBlackConverse 3/30/08 . chapter 15
Gah I'm crying! That was so beautiful..i love Devlin. I love how you've made him really rich and hot and stuff but still he isn't narrow-minded or prejudiced against Drew. Oh I love Drew..feisty and all haha. And yes, I'm aware that this review is very err..late and all but i wanted to add this story to my favourite stories, because i'm going to be reading it again and again and again..