you're amazing. lovely in a gray, straind and breaking way.

This was, simply put, amazing. The words are perfect, they really are. I want to be able to say what I liked best, but it's impossible. To me, for poetry to be good, it has to mean something. It has to affect me, make me feel it. You have achieved that. This is one of the highest compliments I can give. I look forward to reading more of your work. ...(I've decided the first and third stazas are my favorites.)

i like how you didn't capitolize, it gives your writing personality. overal: loved the poem!! great poem, greater poet.

SP

I love the third to last stanza and everything after that. "do i have to show you disdain if i want you to run after me" amazing. I wasn't sure about the first part, but you pull it together at the end. Great job! I love it!:D

Flo

holy bejeebus! this was so pretty. i loved the last line. (oh, and thanks for your review!)

I like it. It really represents a lot of teenage drama. As much as I hate the lot of it, I like the poem because the expresses feelings that I believe a lot of people feel.The only problem I had, being the Poe wonk that I am, is the "nevermore" reference at the end. If this is supposed to be a Poe reference, as it takes the appearance of being, then it was a raven, not a crow. That's all. I'm just a geek about such things. ^_^