|Reviews for Stop Trying To Try|
| HeadofVecna 3/1/05 . chapter 1
Maybe its all just intentional for casual effect, but I thought the lack of capitalization and awkward phrasing e.g. "thank you not" was offputting and disrupted the flow. I thought the line breaks were interesting, but lacked a particular construction. Not enlightening, but insightful.
| Joewhatever 1/23/05 . chapter 1
Nice write. I liked it.
| poetic abortion 12/23/04 . chapter 1
I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. . I forgot all about your review. ;.;
*.* This was really good. ) Keep it up.
| Kalopsia 12/22/04 . chapter 1
interesting poem. i will be honest-i didnt really understand it one bit. but what i did get out of it i liked.