o...its scary good.its really a terrific and philosophicalish poem. I love it.ive often arrived at the same conclusion...utopia is no different from a softer kind of slavery. ...yet its to prevent slavery...

Awesome. I love how the rhyme was frequent, but you still managed to make it flow smoothly. There's an eerie, almost ethereal sort of feel to your words. I would love to hear this performed or even perform it myself.

huh. Intesting subject matter. good job, though.

ah, i see. utopia= perfect... genocide, ehh, i'll look it up in a dictionary later. ( XD )

but i get the main point of this poem, how goverment is cruel. or, i could be wrong.either way, excellent poem! ^_^

Great job! I love the fact that you rhymed but it actually made sense...Whenever I try to make something rhyme it ends up like "the cat/ate/the rat." Anyway, good job.