ncie poem & he is an awesome writer

so true and great question

Interesting ^^ very vivid descriptions

very powerful... I love the whole Sin thing

Me like

I love the imagery! Great use of words. In "Decimation," especially, the image you painted sent a shiver down my spine. Simply beautiful!

how borin

Good use of vocabulary and your rhythm pentameter is very unique

Echoes of Lord Byron

Very unique and quite good

improvements:

none

you seem to jump around a lot within each sonnet

maybe that's the effect you're going for?

over all quite good

woot! thats really good! its very descriptive! i like that a lot! it really makes you want to go outside and look to see everything you described! awsomeness!much love!Natles

Hey Danielle-chan! ^^

Curse that 11th line and my lack of ability to produce proper syllabic poetry -.-...

But the poem is awesome! I love rengas ^^! Yay rengas! This is such a cute poem! Keep writing! Love ya!

~Missa-chan