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Reviews For: My Collection of Renga

simpleplan13
2005-03-30
ch 5,
abusencie poem & he is an awesome writer
simpleplan13
2005-03-30
ch 4,
abuseso true and great question
Vince
2005-03-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseInteresting ^^ very vivid descriptions
simpleplan13
2005-03-27
ch 3,
abusevery powerful... I love the whole Sin thing
Nothing Profound
2004-12-20
ch 1,
abuseMe like
Silver Phoenix Falling
2004-12-19
ch 2,
abuseI love the imagery! Great use of words. In "Decimation," especially, the image you painted sent a shiver down my spine. Simply beautiful!
yayya
2004-12-13
ch 1, anon.
abusehow borin
Beau
2004-12-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseGood use of vocabulary and your rhythm pentameter is very unique

Echoes of Lord Byron

Very unique and quite good

improvements:

none

you seem to jump around a lot within each sonnet

maybe that's the effect you're going for?

over all quite good
Natalie
2004-12-13
ch 1, anon.
abusewoot! thats really good! its very descriptive! i like that a lot! it really makes you want to go outside and look to see everything you described! awsomeness!much love!Natles
Living on Dreams
2004-12-13
ch 1,
abuseHey Danielle-chan! ^^

Curse that 11th line and my lack of ability to produce proper syllabic poetry -.-...

But the poem is awesome! I love rengas ^^! Yay rengas! This is such a cute poem! Keep writing! Love ya!

~Missa-chan
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