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| simpleplan13 2005-03-30 ch 5, | abusencie poem & he is an awesome writer |
| simpleplan13 2005-03-30 ch 4, | abuseso true and great question |
| Vince 2005-03-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting ^^ very vivid descriptions |
| simpleplan13 2005-03-27 ch 3, | abusevery powerful... I love the whole Sin thing |
| Nothing Profound 2004-12-20 ch 1, | abuseMe like |
| Silver Phoenix Falling 2004-12-19 ch 2, | abuseI love the imagery! Great use of words. In "Decimation," especially, the image you painted sent a shiver down my spine. Simply beautiful! |
| yayya 2004-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abusehow borin |
| Beau 2004-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood use of vocabulary and your rhythm pentameter is very unique Echoes of Lord Byron Very unique and quite good improvements: none you seem to jump around a lot within each sonnet maybe that's the effect you're going for? over all quite good |
| Natalie 2004-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abusewoot! thats really good! its very descriptive! i like that a lot! it really makes you want to go outside and look to see everything you described! awsomeness!much love!Natles |
| Living on Dreams 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseHey Danielle-chan! ^^ Curse that 11th line and my lack of ability to produce proper syllabic poetry -.-... But the poem is awesome! I love rengas ^^! Yay rengas! This is such a cute poem! Keep writing! Love ya! ~Missa-chan |