That is really deep! I wuv it! You really get into it and it explains so many emoti0ns at a time. AMAZING! Great work, keep it up. Also, thanks for the great review, I appreciate it! Keep up the great work!

i have read this before! i like this one a lot. awesome job aaron!

Cool, it has A good flow.

Powerful accusations in this poem. I really like it. As though you are part of something you do not really wish to be, but at the same time are a total different entity. Just my take...but I really like it. Great piece.

wow.. i liek the way that flows.. very nicely done