wow that was so raw and wow... i felt like i was maggie which is why i'm crying my eyes out. eck i never liked nick much anways... too icky for me

wow is all i can say

this is one of those story's that really makes you go silent after ( in a good way)

keep writing!

THAT ROCKED! hAD ME GOING ALL TEH WAY TO THE LAST CHAPTER AND I SWEAR WERE i FLUFFIER, i'D HAVE CRIED

oh wow.. just wow... i loved your story... its so raw and so well.. sad.

the pace of the story is wonderful, i actually couldn't stop reading until i finished it!

*sobs* That was...uhm...sad, for lack of a better term. I loved it, but it was sad. Great job!

Hey! I'm sorry I didn't review every chapter but I just couldn't stop reading. I had to know what was coming next. This was an INCREDIBLE story. Extremely well written and very realistic. The pacing was perfect and I especially liked the last chapter. I liked how it all flowed. And i love Kade! *ahem* Sorry, just had to say that. :) Looking forward to more of your work! Good luck!

-LittleMissMuffet

good story

Goodness that was an excellent story! It even made me cry at the end...it defiently was a tear-jerker. I wonder how you made such an excellent story.

Awesome so far. I love how you give clues connecting the past with the present like that. Very good.

I was very sad that the baby died. I was hoping to see what she looked like.. but I'm glad Maggie is happy and I knew she'd be with Kade in the end. Good story

That was the best story I have ever read on any of these sites. The way you ended it, your writing style, everything about it shows the true emotions of the characters. You are an amazingly gifted author, keep up the good work.

I'm sad..

but I can't stop thinking..

and I really feel like I can relate to the main characters thought process..

and I never get that.

This chapter so far has gotten me so close to crying because I relate to it SO MUCH. It's amazing.

Yep it's actually me reviewing one of your stories! This is by far your best story, i think. The ending was very good, you finally protrayed what Maggie was feeling emotionaly in depth. In some middle chapters you kind of skimped on that. But that doesn't matter, it's over and this story was very good..., no it was absolutly sensational! Keep up the good work!!

i liked it. :)