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Reviews For: The Illuminated Trail
Eirien 2005-01-12 . chapter 1
Sad and beautiful, very reflective and melancholy, subdued in its tone, and at the same time brimming with emotions beneath the surface. Reminds me a bit of Poe or other (pre)Romantic writers, perhaps Thomas Gray. I love your style of writing, it's very lyrical and beautiful.
simpleplan13 2004-12-16 . chapter 1
wow.. very powerful and beautifully written.. tahnsk for your review
obsidian katana 2004-12-15 . chapter 1
another great poem. well written, nicely expressed emotions, tragic, but i like this a lot. you really have a way with words. keep up the awesome work!
Aslan Israel 2004-12-14 . chapter 1
Very interesting subject matter. Where did you come up with the idea? anyway, you use of words astounds me. Wonderful imagery, wonderful everything. Brava.
mizu no kokoro 2004-12-13 . chapter 1
wow, some big words in this eh?great job, i reli liked the way you've expressed your feelings in this!^^

keep writing!
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