Hey! Thanks for reviewing out work! I thought I'd check out some of your stuff. Generally I find that when you review it works better to let out every secret so when you reread it you feel like the entire feeling of the topic is there. It's probably personal, but thats what makes it so good to post where only people you dont know will see it =p Anyway this poems definately go some suspense in it, but i think you should elaborate.

- Lana (Strands of Gossamer)

Um, your writing deffinately has potential.

*wow!*